More developing countries are being given aid by international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
International organizations are giving
aid
to some nations which are under the process of growth but, some masses believe that economic aid
is important for nation growth. However
rest
of the people think that practical knowledge and Suggestion
the rest
advise
for growth of the a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
country
is more vital as compared to money
related help. I will discuss both the view point
in my upcoming paras and a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
then
I will give my opinion .
Accept space
.
To begin
with, the pupils those are in support of giving capital as a
Suggestion
an
aid
by organizations to developing countries they think that capital have a power to change the country
faster.so
, by giving financial help to those developing nations is beneficial for that to a very great extent or degree
So
nations
upcoming bright future. Suggestion
nation's
For instance
, by using that currency the nation can improve their infrastructure or their education pattern which will futher
help them in to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
development
of Suggestion
the development
country
.
Suggestion
the country
On the contrary
, people who are not supporting the financial aid
and they are in the support of sharing the secret of success of that developed nations. They think that the information and advise
which the organization like WHO and many a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
other
share that will help the plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
country
to develop rapidly. For example
, organization like WHO many times organised a
conferences in which all developed or under developing nations are invited and they discussed some major health related issues which are rising tremendously and they expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
also
suggest some solutions to solve the problem.
In my perceptive
, I think Suggestion
perception
money
play a crucial role in the development of all nation but
, using financial resources significantly and appropriately is Suggestion
nations, but
nations but
also
essential. If, I have some money
to invest but
I don't know investing Accept comma addition
invest, but
money
in which field of life is fruitful for me and I will get profit from which side? Then
my money
will be waste unfortunately and I will not get any benefit from that so taking some one
wise and experienced person a human being
someone
advise
play a vital role in bad phrase of life.
To put it in the nutshell, I will pen down by saying that both the factors Suggestion
advises
money
and practical aids and suggestions are equally important for some nations which are going on under development process but in my view a wise advice can change the future of anyone.Submitted by bohar1111990 on
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