More developing countries are being given aid by international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

International organizations are giving
aid
to some nations which are under the process of growth but, some masses believe that economic
aid
is important for nation growth.
However
rest
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the rest
of the people think that practical knowledge and
advise
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
for growth of the
country
is more vital as compared to
money
related help. I will discuss both the
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
in my upcoming paras and
then
I will give my opinion
.
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.
To begin
with, the pupils those are in support of giving capital as
a
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an
aid
by organizations to developing countries they think that capital have a power to change the
country
faster.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, by giving financial help to those developing nations is beneficial for that
nations
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nation's
upcoming bright future.
For instance
, by using that currency the nation can improve their infrastructure or their education pattern which will
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
help them in
development
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the development
of
country
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the country
.
On the contrary
, people who are not supporting the financial
aid
and they are in the support of sharing the secret of success of that developed nations. They think that the information and
advise
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
which the organization like WHO and many
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
share that will help the
country
to develop rapidly.
For example
, organization like WHO many times organised
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
conferences in which all developed or under developing nations are invited and they discussed some major health related issues which are rising tremendously and they
also
suggest some solutions to solve the problem. In my
perceptive
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perception
, I think
money
play a crucial role in the development of all
nation but
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nations, but
nations but
, using financial resources significantly and appropriately is
also
essential. If, I have some
money
to
invest but
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invest, but
I don't know investing
money
in which field of life is fruitful for me and I will get profit from which side?
Then
my
money
will be waste unfortunately and I will not get any benefit from that so taking
some one
a human being
someone
wise and experienced person
advise
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advises
play a vital role in bad phrase of life. To put it in the nutshell, I will pen down by saying that both the factors
money
and practical aids and suggestions are equally important for some nations which are going on under development process but in my view a wise advice can change the future of anyone.
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