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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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Wealth is a relative term.A nation is considered as wealth and developed based on certain parameters
food
 and
education
 can be considered as some of the
parameter
Suggestion
parameters
 as important.Some people
aruge
present reasons and arguments
argue
waelth
expresses the means used
with
wealth
 nation share
there
of them or themselves
their
 wealth among poorer nations and other hand it is
local government responsibility
Suggestion
a local government responsibility
 to provide basic amenities to
society
. A nation becomes wealthy when all the citizens have access to primary amenities
such
 as
food
,
Accept space
,
medical and
education
.In developed countries provide free
education
 and
Food
 for
subsidized rate
Suggestion
the subsidized rate
a subsidized rate
 for those who cannot afford. Wealthier nations not only take care of the poorer section of the
society but
Accept comma addition
society, but
also
performand
Suggestion
perform and
 participate in many Corporate Social Responsibilities so that they can provide support to those in developing countries.NGO's
such
 as UNICEF, CRY
etc
 are working actively across the globe to provide support for the above cause. The problem of poverty suffered by poorer nations lies elsewhere.It is the corruption among the local governments. The local government hardly uses the
fundsfor
Suggestion
funds for
 the cause for which it is allocated. They don't understand the importance of
food
 and basic
education
 which is the fundamental right of every person in
society
. So it can be concluded that providing
food
 and
education
 is a joint responsibility
ofboth
Suggestion
of both
 the wealthy nations and local governments of the poorer nations.The grants received through the NGO's should be properly utilized for the betterment of
society

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