Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The notions of community

can be vary

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can vary

depend on time and there

are

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plenteous

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plenty

reason for it. There are two kinds of main people

group

in the

society

such

as same opinion

group

of human being and

other type

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the other type

other types

is mismatching view

group but

Accept comma addition

group, but

the main considerable point in here is both are part of the human world and all are

need

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needed

to social wellbeing. As per to my opinion, the most rare concept in Sri Lankan and other Asian societies where people with disagreed opinion never stay together and it is a negative impact for

socio

relating to human society and its members

social

cultural and

economical

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economic

way. In contemporary, world has various types of conflicts because of the disagreements of the individual ideas. We can categorize it as

ethnical

cultural

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culture

, norms and language conflicts between each

groups

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group

which makes the barriers

for

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peace and harmony. The main concept I

here

perceive (sound) via the auditory sense

hear

is when people associate more interrelated ideal groups in the

society

it aims to distinguish the connection between other types of attitude people in the

society

. So my suggestion is to build up more relationship with various types of individual within the

society

and it helps to

sharp

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sharper

the human qualities as well. Generally, if man can understand the various ideas of others and respect that obviously combine with the mutual understanding of the people and

further

in lots of developed

country

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countries

is the world are examples for mismatching views of

community

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the community

who work together to achieve the global goals. In Sri Lanka Sinhala Buddhist people willing to associate only same

group

, same attitude

group

and it is the major point of discrimination of Sinhala Buddhist

society

with lots of wars and arguments. As a conclusion the human qualities are booming

as a result

of various

type

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types

of views in the

society

same as new concepts in the global village

also

coming from the combination of

disagreed

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disagreeing

views of each personality.

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the childhood of the person, the mandatory requirement should be

associate

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associated

with various views and respect to others views and

further

within a day it will be help to think more competitive way to abolish the social myths.

Fri Oct 25 2019

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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