Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The notions of community
can be vary
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can vary
depend on time and there
are
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is
plenteous
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plenty
reason for it. There are two kinds of main people
group
in the
society
such
as same opinion
group
of human being and
other type
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the other type
other types
is mismatching view
group but
Accept comma addition
group, but
the main considerable point in here is both are part of the human world and all are
need
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needed
to social wellbeing. As per to my opinion, the most rare concept in Sri Lankan and other Asian societies where people with disagreed opinion never stay together and it is a negative impact for
socio
relating to human society and its members
social
cultural and
economical
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economic
way. In contemporary, world has various types of conflicts because of the disagreements of the individual ideas. We can categorize it as
ethnical
,
cultural
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culture
, norms and language conflicts between each
groups
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group
which makes the barriers
for
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to
peace and harmony. The main concept I
here
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
is when people associate more interrelated ideal groups in the
society
it aims to distinguish the connection between other types of attitude people in the
society
. So my suggestion is to build up more relationship with various types of individual within the
society
and it helps to
sharp
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sharper
the human qualities as well. Generally, if man can understand the various ideas of others and respect that obviously combine with the mutual understanding of the people and
further
in lots of developed
country
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countries
is the world are examples for mismatching views of
community
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the community
who work together to achieve the global goals. In Sri Lanka Sinhala Buddhist people willing to associate only same
group
, same attitude
group
and it is the major point of discrimination of Sinhala Buddhist
society
with lots of wars and arguments. As a conclusion the human qualities are booming
as a result
of various
type
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types
of views in the
society
same as new concepts in the global village
also
coming from the combination of
disagreed
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disagreeing
views of each personality.
At
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In
the childhood of the person, the mandatory requirement should be
associate
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associated
with various views and respect to others views and
further
within a day it will be help to think more competitive way to abolish the social myths.

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