More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?

Movement is one of the characteristics of humans and as
such
immigartion
migration into a place (especially migration to a country of which you are not a native in order to settle there)
immigration
is considered a normal
occurence
an event that happens
occurrence
.
Accept space
.
Immigartion
Suggestion
Immigration
Emigration
of professionals
seem
Suggestion
seems
to the on constant increase recently,
this
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
thus
some people consider as normal while others think
such
is tantamount to stealing resources from the undeveloped countries. In
this
essay I would be writing to disagree with the school of thought which says movement of people to developed countries connotes stealing from the poor countries.
Firstly
, many of the
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
countries are faced with serious issues of unemployment and
underempolyment
. With statistics made available by research, a larger percentage of University graduates in these countries end up
beiing
the state or fact of existing
being
jobless many
Accept comma addition
jobless, many
years after graduation. Others who are lucky to get a job are either underpaid, or doing something completely unrelated to their field of study since that was all their country to offer. It is only normal for
such
people to take advantage of opportunities available in other countries.
Also
, due to continuous growth of technology,
counries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
who have come to
embrass
include in scope; include as part of something broader; have as one's sphere or territory
embrace
technology would require individuals from different parts of the world to
partcipate
share in something
participate
so as to ensure technological evolution goes round the world. All major companies would need on their team, people from different races and backgrounds effectively handle problems with high level of precision. The professional immigrants would be able to bring their
first
-hand
experince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
face-to-face with technology to
profer
present for acceptance or rejection
proffer
a lasting solution which in the long run is for the benefit of the said poor countries. Conclusively, immigration is a natural thing and it should
also
be encouraged for the ultimate benefit of the human race.
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