Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility,others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The author of
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topic makes an assertion that
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there are some people who think that
government
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should protect the
environment
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, some think that every individual should take initiative to protect it. While, some people argue that
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statement holds true for all the cases, other may counter
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assertion by presenting a different
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. In my essay, I will highlight both the cases, and try to present a sound reasoning for my claims.
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one hand,
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environment
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the environment
should be protected by the
government
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.
Beacuse
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Because
they have the authority to control every aspect of their nation. In other word, they can set some rules to the industries
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in order
to minimize the harmful emission and protect the
environment
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.
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, they can protect the
environment
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by planting a huge number or trees.
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, a research paper published by IIT Bangalore shows that the emission of CO from leather industries decreased by around 10% after
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a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
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set some guidelines for them. In short, every
government
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should take the
responsibiliy
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
towards the protection of
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environment
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the environment
.
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, it is always a
responsibility
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of individuals to protect the
environment
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.
This
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statement holds true due to as every person has the right to take the benefits
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of
the
environment
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, it is
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his
responsibility
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to control the usage of every single thing which is harming the
environment
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. In daily life everyone uses different things which
is causing
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are causing
the harm towards the air, water as well as the sound. If they can control it and take a step to be a responsible individual, the
environment
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can be protected.
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, according to the U.S Times, Windsor citizens have controlled their car usage since 2018 and for
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reason there is a significant reduction of air and sound
pollusion
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
in Windsor. Overall, it is clear that, if an individual take
responsibility
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to protect the
environment
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,
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,
the
pollusion
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
can be controlled very easily and effectively. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that
although
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government
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the government
has to take
responsibility
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towards the
environment
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protection, the role of an individual for
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cause
can not
can not
cannot
be denied.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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