Some people think Climate Change has negative effects on businesses, others think it creates opportunities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Constant viewing of
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
televisions
has many impacts either it is
advantage
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an advantage
or disadvantage. One of
many reasons
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the many reasons
is that by watching documentaries and feature films enable people to know about western world and its advancement. In other word, these devices provide a sufficient amount of information, instantly, from the all over the world, eventually, people get
well understanding
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a good understanding
good understanding
of current affairs. Another point is taken into account is that when viewers watch any program frequently, especially, violent content which gradually desensitise towards violence in the
society
. Take a recent research report which
has showed
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has shown
that there is a positive correlation between watching violent movies and crime activities.
Therefore
, many believe that children be restricted from watching obscene and violent programs. Despite, the above mentioned
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
, television
merely influnce
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merely influences
merely influence
merely influenced
the
society
, which means
content
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the content
of the stories always unearth from real life experience than fiction.
This
is
jusrt
and nothing more
just
a reflection of
current situation
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the current situation
in the world.. Our
society
is changing and transforming itself, due to
this
, several people think that television programs just try to preserve conventionality and
status quo
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the status quo
. Apart from
this
, culture is not monolithic and
society
is fragmented
,
Accept space
,
so any tv shows cannot influence the
society
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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