Some people think that teenagers should follow the old generation but others believe that they sould challenge the old thoughts. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is a controversial issue as to whether adolescents ought to follow the convention of their ancestors, or, whether they had better raise questions on orthodox and other beliefs of older

people

. From my perspective,

young

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the young

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generation

excepts

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accepts

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those thoughts of predecessors, which is essential in everyday life and rejects those sorts of beliefs that hamper them.

To begin

with,

from

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for

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many generations,

people

nourish

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have nourished

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some facts and ideas, which are, invariably, helping till now, even though juveniles do not follow.

However

, if they abide by these rules, they would get a success in life.

For example

, in India, most of the parents have a good knowledge of education, which they learnt

it

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apply

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from teachers at their school

such

as early rising, memorizing critical

topic

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topics

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in the morning, maintaining a

balance-diet

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balanced diet

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,

eating

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and eating

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meals on time. These days, students are unbridled in following any of these regulations that

Japanese

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the Japanese

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maintain

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have maintained

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from

the

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time immemorial.

As a result

, they lag behind not only in good health but

also

studying

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in studying

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properly.

In contrast

, there are some disadvantages to

obey

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obeying

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the tradition, and it should not be done by young

people

. In Hinduism,

for instance

, before 100 years ago,

people

used to sacrifice children before idols of goddesses. Thinking that goddesses might be happy, who could bestow wealth, fame and other happiness of life. Now, the present generation should raise their voice against

this

inhuman attitude, though it is prevailing

some

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in some

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parts of the area in India. Another important factor is childhood marriages, which are ubiquitous from

western

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Western

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countries to Asian countries. For that reason, teenagers should take

a

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legal action about

this

.

Thus

, some conventions must

restrict

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be restricted

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by the

hand

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hands

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of youngsters. In conclusion,

although

myriads of masses think that children should follow the

tradition

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traditions

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of older

people

, some believe that they should fight against old thoughts. In my opinion, the idea, which is positive, has to

accept

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be accepted

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by teenagers, and the negative ideas must be challenged through them.