Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills are required in the workplace. other thinks that, the true function of a universities should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What in your opinion, should be the main function of a university.

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What types of
knowledge
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and
skill
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should
university
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provide, has been argued for many years. Some people think that true function can be providing
knowledge
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from educational institutes, but nowadays
,
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,
many people has
point
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pointed
out that universities should give enough resources to its graduate which can be aligned perfectly in
workplace
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the workplace
.
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.
Higher educational
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
or
university
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, must provide certain skills and facilities which are required for the job places. Laboratory and faculty facilities of the
university
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are
lot
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a lot
better than other institute. In
this
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century, without up to date information and
skill
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, surviving in the world is not quite easy. Day by day, employers and industries are making the life of a fresh graduate tough by imposing
higher requirement
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a higher requirement
higher requirements
. And on top of that, most of the industry need to invest a lot by providing trainings of the freshers which demands lots of money from the industry. If the graduate
are
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is
capable enough
to
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for
handling the industry by
hving
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
having
some prior
skill
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, it can save lots of money of the
investers
someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns
investors
.
On the other hand
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,
role
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the role
of the
university
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can not
can not
cannot
be confined within just giving industrial experience to the students.
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, it
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also need
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also needs
to generate new information and discovery which can change the world
.
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.
But, sometimes,
may be
by chance
maybe
these
knowledge
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can be
incombatible
not compatible
incompatible
with the industry’s requirement. By considering
these fact
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these facts
this fact
,
university
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can follow rather moderate approach by providing enough skills to the students so that they can cope with the job market as well as have more information which ultimately matched with job market more precisely. In short,
knowledge
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and
skill
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both can go by hand to
hand which
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hand, which
can be gained mutually from
university
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, and in order to be
successful combination
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a successful combination
of both
opportunity
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opportunities
are required
from
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for
university
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.
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