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As well as, making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

#money #businesses #responsibilities
It is considered that the people earning high wages or developing business will
also
 possess social responsibilities. I completely agree with
this
 statement because by earning more
money
 it can solve numerous
probelms
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 and help people in needs.
Firstly
, having
money
 can solve flaws cause to
poor and
Suggestion
the poor and also
also
 they can involve in social activities. There are many low income public with no proper houses and no developed colonies because of less
money
. So, by having huge income can solve problems.
For instance
, Mark is
founder
Suggestion
the founder
 of
facebook
Suggestion
Facebook
 he has huge
money
. He contributed his total
money
 for social developments like building roads,
streets
Suggestion
street
 light.
Secondly
,
developind
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
 in business can
also
 have social
reaponsibilities
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
 like they have
power
Suggestion
the power
 to control higher authorities which helps in
decelopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
. There are few people want to help needy like constructing roads and houses. But they don’t have
power
 and
also they face
Suggestion
they also face
 political pressures. Whereas, the corporate people have more
power
 they can control higher authorities. Example Ambani is a corporate king and can control higher authorities. With his
power
 he is helping needy and
also
 helped in social development. To conclude, having more
money
 and
power
 can help
in
Suggestion
with
 social developments. By developing roads and
also
 helping poor.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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