Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
day and age, young generation is the base of any nation as an effect they
having
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have
are having
an important role in
society
, so for their self building individuals said that some
chairty
a foundation created to promote the public good (not for assistance to any particular individuals)
charity
work
include in high
school
programmes. I strongly argued that government should take action related unpaid task in community for youngsters.
Firstly
, in the age of high
school
, students need to build their self confidence and get experience by doing unpaid
work
. Due to
achivieving
to gain with effort
achieving
confidence they do not
relay
have confidence or faith in
rely
on parents and doing jobs independently
for
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from
this
governments
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government
should
starts
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start
programs,
compaigns
a race between candidates for elective office
campaigns
campaign
and workshops in the
school
to teach
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teach
school
community.
For example
, a recent research shown that many countries started programs and unpaid
interships
the position of a medical intern
internships
to train the students for their respective a professional
fields
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field
. By doing
this
, they can have more exposure to their related fields of
work
.
secondly
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Secondly
, by doing free
work
in
society
, it will help to young generation become socially responsible. They will help
handicaped
incapable of functioning as a consequence of injury or illness
handicapped
people, cleaning the roads of
society
as well
work
in old age homes, later on, it will help in professional life.
For example
, some students stop their education at
high
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the high school level, so this
the high school level so, this
school
level so,
this
experience will help getting a job in hospitals as
well factories
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well as factories
or as a labour. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that unpaid task in
society
will be more beneficial for that these programs should be
compulsory part
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a compulsory part
of high
schools
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school
.
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