Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, young generation is the base of any nation as an effect they

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are having

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, so for their self building individuals said that some

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a foundation created to promote the public good (not for assistance to any particular individuals)

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include in high

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programmes. I strongly argued that government should take action related unpaid task in community for youngsters.

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, in the age of high

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, students need to build their self confidence and get experience by doing unpaid

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confidence they do not

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have confidence or faith in

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government

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start

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to teach

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teach

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community.

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, a recent research shown that many countries started programs and unpaid

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, they can have more exposure to their related fields of

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, by doing free

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society

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, it will help to young generation become socially responsible. They will help

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incapable of functioning as a consequence of injury or illness

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people, cleaning the roads of

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as well

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in old age homes, later on, it will help in professional life.

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, some students stop their education at

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the high school level, so this

the high school level so, this

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experience will help getting a job in hospitals as

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will be more beneficial for that these programs should be

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a compulsory part

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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236 words

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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