Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People are divided on the opinion of the government spendings on art and culture. It is often thought by some that the authorities ought to be

focus

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focused

on promoting the arts;

however

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, in my

opinion i

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opinion, I

opinion I

agree with the view that other issues like health and education require more attention and

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree. There are

variety

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a variety

of

reaons

a rational motive for a belief or action

reasons

why people believe that financial support for art activities is of less importance and

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree.

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with, education and health sector in most of

countries

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the countries

are not

upto

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up to

the mark.

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, in order to meet standards set by world health organization, a great deal of money is

required which

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required, which

can be poured

in

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into

these services by saving budget from cultural

programes

a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished

programs

programmes

programme

. Healthy and educated community

are

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is

more essential for

thriving country

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a thriving country

in terms of

economical situation

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the economic situation

economic situation

.

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, it seems to me that allocating budget to build hospitals and educational

institues

set up or lay the groundwork for

institutes

are definitely much more important

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then

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than

spending to cultural activities.

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, proponents of opposite view argue that it is necessary for young generation to be aware of their history and culture. As a matter of fact, no nation could be able to survive after losing its identity in

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modern era. If policy makers will not shift their concentration towards promoting

artistic

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arts

events, community will be heavily

influced

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influenced

by cultures of other countries. Asian youth's love for

westren

a film about life in the western United States during the period of exploration and development

Western

western

music and hate for traditional attire is an example of

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imminent threat.

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, the only way to save

tradition

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the tradition

of

country

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the country

a country

is by arranging cultural programmes through governmental support. In conclusion,

althoughcultural

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although cultural

aspects of community can only be highlighted by interest of local authorities,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think that they must support universities and hospitals

for

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in

the development better healthy and literate society.