Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Water
plays an important role in everybody's life. It can be used for many household
activites
any specific behavior
activities
like cooking
,
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,
bathing, drinking and washing clothes. Approximately, 71% of the
earth
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earth's
surface is covered with
water
and in that, only 1%
water
is suitable for drinking purpose. In the past days, there
is
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was
more than sufficient
water
available for
us but
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us, but
in the present times, the problem of fresh drinking
water
is going on incrementing. Soon it is going to become a huge issue for all the people living on the earth. The reasons for
this
drastic change are many. Mostly because of the lack of interest we show towards
environment
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the environment
and
that is
why
this
situation is getting worse. The very
first
reason of
water
scarcity is the waste material, produce by the manufacturing industries, going into
water
bodies. One clear example is, soap manufacturing industries. These industries, they use lots of chemicals to produce a single bar of soap. For the preparation of soap bars, the chemicals went through so many
processess
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
processes
and
then
after getting
using
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used
product, all extra
chemicals
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chemical
discharge
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discharges
into small rivers or lakes. Due to that
water
gets polluted and is not fit for drinking purposes. The
second
reason is over usage of
water
in agriculture purposes.
For instance
, the farmer wants to
water
their farms so he opens the
tap but
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tap, but
forgets to turn it off because of that lot of
water
gets wasted. So, there are many more reasons due to which there is a shortage of fresh
water
. To prevent that, the most important solution is, to reduce global warming.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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