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Write about the topic: • Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. • Why is this? • What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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With every passing day, humans are burning more fossil fuels to meet their daily needs. Not only does
this
 lead to exhaustion of natural resources, but it
also
 leads to serious problems like climate change and pollution.
Hence
, the use of solar
energy
, as an alternative is gaining popularity around the globe.
However
, is the use of solar
energy
 practical, is a question to be answered. With the increase in technology, solar
energy
 has been efficiently harnessed. It comes with a lot of advantages. These systems are easy to set up. Be it a burning desert or a rough
mountainous
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mountain
 road, they can virtually be set-up anywhere.
Nextly
, solar
energy
 is a clean source of
energy
 that does not lead to any type of pollution. Once set up, solar panels have a long life span, with minimal maintenance. On an average, a single solar panel can produce 30 to 40 volts of
energy
, whereas burning 5-10 kgs of coal only produces 20 volts of
energy
.
However
, solar
energy
 comes with its own set of disadvantages. Setting up solar panels can be a costly affair.
Additionally
, harnessing solar
energy
 is practical only in equatorial regions. Cloudy and cold areas up north are at a disadvantage. In conclusion,
although
 solar
energy
 has its disadvantages it is very beneficial for equatorial countries like India, which constantly receive sunlight throughout the year. With proper governmental interventions and financial support, solar
energy
 harnessing systems can find its place in the markets of various countries.
This
 will take human beings
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to
 step
close
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closer
 to a pollution free world.
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