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In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Discuss both the pros and cons of this trend.

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In some countries buying throw internet is taking over the traditional shopping.
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wdays w
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
e live in a word that
time
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 is not our friend anymore. From running to go to work, after that going home, cooking and spending
time
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 with our family is not much
time
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 left to go to the shops and trying to buy all the shopping that we need. For
this
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 reason more and more pe
ole f
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
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easier
o just
shop
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 online and everything comes directly on
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to
our do
or step.
the sill of a door; a horizontal piece of wood or stone that forms the bottom of a doorway and offers support when passing through a doorway
doorstep
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our shopping online gives you the chance to check the prices and even compare them, and even finding a lot of discounts. As a
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an
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example, I
as looking to buy a new laptop and trying online I de
scovered t
discovered or determined by scientific observation
discovered
hat in one place, cu
rrys
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Currys
curries
carriers
were selling the same product with 30% less that what I saw on ar
gos.
an ancient city in southeastern Greece; dominated the Peloponnese in the 7th century BC
Argos
Argus
argos'
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ometimes is better to lo
ok and
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look, and
shop
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 on
line but t
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online, but
here are times when shopping online will waste your
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 and money.
On the other ha
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nd when y
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hand, when
ou go and buy directly from the
shop
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 you have the chance to see the product, to check it and even to try it.
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 as clothes, you can order online, but it ca
n not f
can not
cannot
it you or even the material si
n
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
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ot what you wanted, and is much better to buy direct from
shop
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 as you can try and check them. Ov
erall there i
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Overall, there
s personal choice how we buy and is more about the
time
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 that each of us al
ocates t
discover the location of; determine the place of; find by searching or examining
locates
o shopping.
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