The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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privides

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provides

information about the recycling rate of four various

materials

from 1982 to 2010 in a specific country.

Overall

, the recycling rate of distinct

materials

is raised except

one

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substance in just under a

thirty year

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period.

However

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there is a gap of four years

in

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which the line graph is showing. The proportion of four

materials

, from these

the

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paper

and

cardboard

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has

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the highest

percentage

of recycling when

compare

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to other

materials

. The glass containers

is

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just similar to the

paper

and

cardboard

with just a few fluctuations had been

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place. In 1982 the

percentage

of

paper

and

cardboard

is 60 and it had been capricious

by

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the following years to 70% in 2010. When it comes to glass containers the

percentage

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gradually increased from 50% to 60%. In regard to aluminium cans

is

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it

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burgeon from 2% to 45% but it does not reach the

percentage

of

paper

and

cardboard

.

Whereas

the plastics not much increased, just only from nill

percentage

to 9%.