Nowadays many children are playing computer games instead of doing sports activities. why is it happening? is it a negative or positive development?
Today majority
of children spend their free time playing games on Suggestion
Today the majority
The today majority
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computer
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the computer
instead
of doing physical activities. It is because the modern Linking Words
technology especially
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technology, especially
computer
video games have completely controlled the activities of children. I believe Use synonyms
this
is impacting their life negatively and it is definitely not a positive development.
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before but
it has negatively changed the lifestyles and activities of young ones. I think it is Accept comma addition
before, but
also
happening due to the Linking Words
neglegence
of parents towards their children. These days most of the parents failure to act with the prudence that a reasonable person would exercise under the same circumstances
negligence
do not put
any extra effort to encourage their children to participate in sports activities or propel and motivate them to indulge in physical games Suggestion
are not putting
such
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, if parents will focus more Linking Words
on sports
activities than virtual games and educate their children about the importance of participating in sports activities and set certain timings for using Accept comma addition
on, sports
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computer
Suggestion
a computer
computers
the computer
then
many positive changes can be seen in the development of their children.
It is observed almost Linking Words
every where
that now children have entirely lost touch with outdoor sports activities and unfortunately spend most of their valuable time wasting on to or in any or all places
everywhere
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computer
and Suggestion
computers
the computer
a computer
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games that are useless and adding nothing useful for their mental and physical development. According to the recent survey, about 80% of school going children are addicted to playing games on Suggestion
iPad
computer
and digital devices at home. Use synonyms
Moreover
, children who play outdoor games and participate in sports have Linking Words
stronger body
and healthier brain than those children who have sadly turned into couch potatoes and prefer playing indoor digital games on PC and sit for long hours at one place without any body movement.
To sum up, Parents should try to keep an eye on daily routine and activities of their children and should not merely rely on technology. Computers should be used by children adequately to avoid playing on it excessively. In order to have a healthy mind and body children need to be constantly encouraged to perform sports activities which are beneficial for their mental and physical growth.Suggestion
a stronger body
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