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Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places .what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?

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It is true that, some
university
 students tend to live with their families while studying in their
home
 town, others are coerced to live away from
home
 in order to pursue higher education. There are advantages and disadvantages of both these situations. If
university
 student
are
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is
 able to live with their family, there are both merits and demerits of
this
 situation.
To begin
 with, since they do not have to live with family, they are able to economize, as they do not have to pay for accommodation.
Moreover
, they enjoy full family support in terms of complete financial and moral support. In spite of, all these advantages
,
Accept space
,
 staying at
home
has
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have
 some disadvantages as well.
Such
 as, students staying at
home
 often complains of lack of concentration in their studies due to disturbance from family members or relatives.
This
 may result in poor time management and
also
 leave them without a dedicated space in which to study.
For example
, in the evenings or at the weekends it is hard to keep up with study schedule.
On the other hand
, when students live away from family, there are lots of advantages.
Firstly
, staying away from family could make them mature enough to live independently. Resultantly,
this
 may have some positive effect on their personality.
Secondly
, staying close to
university
 might benefit them in learning.
Supposingly
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Surprisingly
, they can have sessions of group study, easy
excess
the right to enter
access
 to
library
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the library
 and escape the distractions of family life.
However
, one major demerit of staying away from
home
 is to find a suitable accommodation with basic facilities that are covered within the budget. In conclusion, personal opinion of individual
university
 student varies, some potential pros and cons of living at
home
 or away from
home
 can be identified.

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