Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer Nations. However, the government of richer Nations should take responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area. What is your opinion?

The line graph illustrates the
number
of commuters who travel by underground tubes in a typical day from morning 6 am
to night
during the night of the present day
tonight
10 pm, over a 16 hour time period. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that even though morning and evening hours witnessed the highest
number
of travellers, mid day has lower
number
of passengers. Interestingly, both morning and evening 6 o clock is the lowest point of rush hour. Looking at the
first
eight hours of the commuting,
travellers
Suggestion
traveller
flow beginning at 6 am at approximately 100 passengers,
then
this
figure continued to grow and hitting its peak at 400 passengers at 8 am. Following
this
, a sudden decline can be seen before it climbs again to nearly 300 commuters in 2 '
o' clock
according to the clock
o'clock
after noon
the part of the day between noon and evening
afternoon
.
However
, London see the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
down fall till 4pm, after which
this
figure rises again back to its
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
peak point, almost the same
number
of passengers in the morning 6 am. Having reached another high point, the passengers influx
begin
Suggestion
begins
to slip and end at around 130 in 10 ‘o’clock.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international solidarity
  • philanthropic responsibility
  • bilateral cooperation
  • economic disparity
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable development
  • globalization
  • humanitarian assistance
  • capacity building
  • trade liberalization
  • infrastructure development
  • socio-economic growth
  • healthcare improvement
  • educational reform
  • market access
  • global economy
  • developmental economics
  • financial assistance
  • economic sanctions
  • global governance
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