The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Space
is the final frontier for mankind, the nascent industry already offering countless number of job opportunities. Due to the negative impacts of mass global tourism, renders humans find another destination is inevitable. By flourishing
this
industry, it may provide a gateway for the
space
settlement in the future. The profit from
this
can be used to finance the
space
military ambitions.
However
, others think that it is unnecessary because there are other many problems in the world required to be resolved before starting ventures like
space
exploration and
space
tourism.
Similarly
, Rocket emissions
further
damage Oxon layer;
this
aggravate global warming and climate changes. Currently, the risk involved in the
space
travelling is extremely high and it is kind of gambling of the life with death. Many think that it is an elite industry, designed to indulge the whims of the super rich.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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