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some prople argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. discuss both views and give your opinion.

#prople #job #money #salary #life
It has always been argued among people
wether
introduces two alternatives
whether
either
 to choose a
job
 that you like doing it or a
job
 that pays more. Every group
have
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has
 some solid reason for their opinion. In my view both groups have ideas worth considering. The major concept behind having a
job
 is to earn
money
 and as the wage goes up it could change many things in someones
life
.
we
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We
 people have to
work
 for almost thirty years in our
life
 to reach retirement and a
job
 with good salary not only means more
money
 in your
worklife
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work life
 but
also
 more when you reach retirement and in a world that
money
 can change almost
evey
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
 aspect of
life
 earning more
money
 has always been appealing. Apposing to the idea of better
money
 leads to better
life
 quality, there are people who
conside
deem to be
consider
 the time you spend at
work
 a very important part of
life
 and conclude that if you do what you like the most as a
job
 you will be a happier person
eventhough
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even though
 if it does not pays as much as boring or hard jobs.
This
 idea comes from the notion that an adult person spend most of his time at
work
 and
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
 he
persue
win approval or support for
persuade
person
 himself to
work
 in jobs that are stressful with high workload or long shift works or even jobs that demand working in
hazardus
involving risk or danger
hazardous
 conditions, there is a great chance that he becomes depressed or even put his
life
 in danger. So it does not worth it. In conclusion working in
job
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a job
jobs
 which results in better salary has a lot of benefits and so do a
job
 which you enjoy doing it and does not impose
great amount
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a great amount
 of stress and
job
 demands on you. In my
view it
Accept comma addition
view, it
 is the best to find a
job
 that has some good aspects of both
side
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sides
 of the argument and do not make an extreme decision.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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