Religious The first
that has played an essential role in my personal experience is the Church. Having the same purpose and beliefs creates a strong connection among participants.
, spreading the message of the Bible about being loved as equals, as
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and sisters, enhances kindness among
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and the necessity of fitting into a pattern, religious
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those who attend the same classes. The fundamental motive is the daily living at college. Other students in the same program fight the same battles
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me;
, they can fully understand my frustrations and victories without
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classmates is
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of knowing that there is another person going through the same
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support to achieve better grades. Learning focus
The third
can be applied in both virtual and physical worlds.
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discipline and excitement to master diverse skills. When having conversations with
of
, I felt motivated and more interested in the subjects that I aim to learn. The frustrations, despite still being a reality, are not
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used to be. Friends from college The fourth
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, similar backgrounds, and equal objectives. Similarities create a genuine connection, providing plenty of chances for interaction. Emotions are commonly positive and cheerful, resulting in grateful memories.
, another important aspect of the
is the personal confidence and trust felt with them. It gives the possibility of talking openly with most of the
.
, meeting with the
reduce stress, depression, and feeling of isolation. Support
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, in support
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and maybe overcome daunting challenges together. Supporting
give the confidence for freedom of expression. The emotion of feeling less lonely, as present in other
, is stronger when coming to the weekly reunions. A unique benefit of the
is feeling less judged, since most of the participants can possibly understand every aspect of your
.
of hometown The final
is important since it gives a sense of recognition. Having other
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confidence.
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teams, working together for a similar purpose may
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the relationships with other players. Playing in
creates a
of trust, as the whole team shares the same victories and losses.
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might be constant as
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personal victories depend on others’ attitudes and
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. A positive emotion resulting from the
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teammates and captains.