Some suggest than young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be fo people who do this.
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youngsters
enrolled in
universities every Accept comma addition
enrolled, in
year
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Certain number
of people believe that young people should emphasize Suggestion
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work
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.
On the one hand, higher education is excessive money required an event. So, some young people decide to Use synonyms
work
hard to save enough money for paying their Use synonyms
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year
of university expenses like a tuition fee, a living cost and books. Money that they saved allows them to more focus on academic studies Use synonyms
instead
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financial situation
. As Suggestion
the financial situation
financial situations
result they
can achieve high academic result. Suggestion
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a result they
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, there is a fact that people gain quite a lot of soft skills Linking Words
for example
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there
working, these skills help students to learn more in academic levels.
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On the other hand
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don't want to study
don't want study
do not want study
study
again after Use synonyms
work
a Use synonyms
sometime
. Suggestion
some time
Basically it
can be said that motivation to learn things goes down slightly after Accept comma addition
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work
. A recent survey revealed one in three people under age of twenties never come back to academic Use synonyms
study
after a gap Use synonyms
year
. As Use synonyms
result
, they Suggestion
a result
put
themselves Suggestion
will put
in
high risk of unemployment in the future. Even some people Suggestion
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decides
to Suggestion
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study
after couple years of working, their ability to learn things usually become slower. Generally, Use synonyms
this
consequence influences their overall academic achievements.
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work
one Use synonyms
year
after Use synonyms
graduate
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graduation
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, working a while after high school gives chances for students to earn some money and gain some skills Linking Words
from
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from field work
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,
disadvantages
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disadvantages, for
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further
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study
.Use synonyms
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