Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that wearing
uniform
Suggestion
uniforms
should be made mandatory in
work place
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the work place
. While I understand some people may find it unnecessary, I strongly believe that it has more benefits. On one hand, People believe that it is completely useless to make employees wear
uniform
.
First
and foremost, Every individual has right to make their own decision to choose
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
. By restricting someone to stick with specific attire will hurt freedom of choice.
Secondly
, Everyone has
unique personality
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a unique personality
unique personalities
, Mandatory
uniform
will make
person
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people
a person
the person
difficult to showcase his or her identity. For an instance, A
uniform
like
white shirt
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a white shirt
and blue pants an individual can put no
variataion
an instance of change; the rate or magnitude of change
variation
variations
in it. But having formal dress code will make more sense since it will open m option to choose more
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
.
Finally
, There might be certain age group may not feel comfortable with uniforms. For an example, Young professionals will find
uniform
boring and pointless since it
doesnt
does not
doesn't
affect their work
effeciency
the ratio of the output to the input of any system
efficiency
. On
other hand
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the other hand
, Uniforms can provide
sense
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a sense
the sense
of unity among employees of one particular organization. To illustrate, Regardless of different national origin, gender, religion employees will feel united. Another advantage is nobody has to worry about keeping up with fashion.
Furthermore
, It is
also
cost effective
uniform
has one
flate
having a surface without slope, tilt in which no part is higher or lower than another
flat
fault
rate.
Last
but not least, It promotes equality among coworkers. For an example,
Employee
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an Employee
who is
Chief executive officer
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the Chief executive officer
of a company or just
an
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a
clerk at
company
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the company
a company
will be wearing
same
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the same uniform
uniform
. In
this
way nobody will feel inferior or superior in
work environment
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the work environment
. Strictly sticking with a
uniform
may seem like old school. But
,
Accept space
,
In my opinion
,
Accept space
,
it clearly has more advantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • promote unity
  • sense of belonging
  • eliminate dress code issues
  • professional appearance
  • enhance the company's image
  • suppress individuality
  • personal expression
  • balanced approach
  • public interaction
  • professionalism
  • personal attire
  • without public exposure
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