Some languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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widely used in verbal
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in different nations,
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there is a rapid decrease in
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with others.
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positive outcome because
few
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languages
will make communication easier
as well as
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of communications happen in gestures,
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speaking
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same dialect will break the iceberg in communication. It has been widely seen
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the best result comes when everyone understands the problem and
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speech makes it easier.
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research done by the University of Melbourne
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cognitive behaviours in Problem Solving and the result was astonishing. It has been found that
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where everyone understands each other, they solve the problem faster than others. Another reason why speaking in a few tongues is beneficial, it helps the world to develop a strong economy. In everyday business
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the way of
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email, chat and Phone calls.
However
, all these media need a language to talk and get feedback. It is
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to communicate in one or two
languages
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or
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Moreover
, in the past, there were some speeches like Sumerian are no longer used and
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did not
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any negative impact
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our lives. In conclusion, there
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a rise in certain
languages
such
as English, Spanish, French, Japanese and Mandarin because
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they are spoken by the most developed countries and some others like Soheli and
Saskrit
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Sanskrit
are not being spoken by many individuals. It is predicted that in the future there will be no more than twenty spoken
languages
in the world because to have
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easy and effective communication and financial growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global linguistics
  • cultural heritage
  • diversity tapestry
  • economic growth
  • technological innovation
  • educational opportunities
  • linguistic imperialism
  • marginalizing
  • homogeneity
  • ecological knowledge
  • social cohesion
  • communication barriers
  • national unity
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