On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter • Describe the item you have lost • Explain how you lost it • Tell the insurance company what you would like to do

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Dear

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Anderson, I am John Cooper, and I have premium travel Insurance with your company. I am writing to claim

insurance

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on my lost

laptop

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with, I have lost my Dell i5 Core

laptop

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, which was Red in colour. Just 6 months back I had purchased it, and it was worth 65000 INR. I still have the receipt with me if you need it.

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, I lost it, when I was changing my

flight

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from Pune to Mumbai. I boarded my

flight

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in Delhi and via

Pune

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I was flying to Mumbai. While changing my

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in Pune, I lost my

laptop

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. I stopped for a coffee and suddenly I heard the announcement for my

flight

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, and request to board the

flight

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as soon as possible. I forgot my

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, where I sat for coffee.

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, mercifully, I have premium travel cover

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lost items. I will really appreciate your efforts if you credit the money

into

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my credit card or contact me for any other form of payment

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. Kindly find my business card for my contact details. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, John Cooper.

naziya.bustaniSun Nov 10 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
correspondence

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