These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away whereas in past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change in attitude?

Repair and reusing daily use products
has long been
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have long been
had long been
a part of our tradition and habits. While, a higher percentage of our
generation
tend to get rid of the used and damaged articles;
however
, that was certainly not the case with people from my mother’s
generation
, as they had both skill and will, to repair household items, sew and alter their own clothes, etc.
This
essay will discuss the reasons for
this
change over the generations and what are its effects. Since, purchasing power has increased drastically over the years, people are more willing to replace rather than repair; whereas, in the past people had low wages, and bigger families to provide
support to, which
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support, which
negatively impacted their purchasing parity.
In addition
to
this
, these days people are purchasing more frequently because of the poor quality manufacturing of products, whereas in past products were made to
last
longer than they do these days.
For example
, furniture purchased by someone of our father’s
generation
would
last
for a
lifetime whereas
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lifetime, whereas
these
days furniture
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days, furniture
lasts for only five to ten years.
This
change in attitude is leaving
current
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the current generation
generation
with no savings for their harder times.
For example
, people are spending their hard earned money in purchasing not so required articles.
Moreover
, they are creating negative environmental impacts by throwing away the things that are not bio-degradable.
For example
, throwing the products made
form
a giver or sender
from
plastic will surely result in detrimental to our environment. In conclusion,
although
this
change in attitude has created
lot
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a lot
more employment opportunities than ever before because of ever increasing
demand but
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demand, but
we are creating these opportunities at the cost of our own skills and deteriorating environmental health.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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