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fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

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One the one hand, the pressure of the growing
population
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 on
water
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 resources could lead to the shortage of it. Increase number of
population
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 lead to an increased
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 demand in three
sectors namely
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sectors, namely
 Agriculture, Industry and households.
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, from an agricultural perspective, irrigation consumes a large amount of
water
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.
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, Agricultural industry could pollute the rest of the
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 by chemical compounds that used in farming like pesticides.
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, the industries and factories use a huge amount of
water
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 in their process.
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, some research revealed that meat processing industry could be the main cause of
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 shortage in some regions of the UK.
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,
water
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 used for household purposes could be another consequence of
growth number
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the growing number
growing number
a growing number
 of
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population
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the population
 and ultimately could lead to
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 demand.
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, there are two main solutions to solve the problems described above. One solution is that
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 recycling could play an important role in
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 conservation. Governments should build new
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pipes
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pipe
 system for recycling and should encourage people to use recycled
water
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. Another solution is to remove
salts
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salt
 from sea
water
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 to enable people to use it.
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process called
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process, called
 desalination. It is now used in many countries like the USA and achieved their goal. In conclusion,
water
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 demand is a global problem caused mainly by the growth of
population
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number and
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number, and
 governments and people should be cooperated to solve
this
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 issue.
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