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Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the ultramodern era
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,
lately
accquaintances
personal knowledge or information about someone or something
acquaintances
 have been made through multimedia.These
gadegets
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
gadgets
 have revolutionised the
concpt
an abstract or general idea inferred or derived from specific instances
concept
 of
counication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
.Some critics opine that interaction through
ultratec
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Ultratec
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
 has been much better than face to face interaction.
Although
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,
this
 essay upholds the view that
this
 trend
inturn
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in turn
 leads to deterioration of
relationship
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relationships
,
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,
yet ponders on both issues Some critics opine that, the new generation
often rely
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often relies
 on social media to interact with people.
Moreover
,
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,
they
conceed
admit (to a wrongdoing)
concede
conceded
concealed
that undoubtedly
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that, undoubtedly
,
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,
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 of smart
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electronic equipment that converts sound into electrical signals that can be transmitted over distances and then converts received signals back into sounds
phones
 and internet has
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cause the downfall of; of rulers
subverted
 the
offline
 relationships including
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within each other's presence
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 interaction.For
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excessive
 use.
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 has indeed snatched the ability of
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command with authority
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the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
connection
.
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 has
eaxceptionally become
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become exceptionally
exceptionally become
exceptional become
 easy to
contacat
close interaction
contact
counteract
 each other
elecatronically
by electronic means
electronically
 and
share
 information instantaneously in a
comunity
a group of people living in a particular local area
community
.
they
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They
 can
share
 photos and videos
simultaneiously
at the same instant
simultaneously
 with many people
.
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.
The cutting edge
tehnologiees
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
 have eased the life of many Whereas
,
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,
technology makes communication less personal,
However
, with
offline
 friendships one get an opportunity to meet with their companions regularly. To illustrate
this
, 80% of the people
share
 their problems and opinions more with their friends and less with their families. The reason for
this
 is that they get a chance to pass the message to someone whom they think is more trustworthy and can certainly help them to get out of the situation.
In addition
, they spend their weekend
time especially
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time, especially
 with their past-time classmates in order to
share
 some jokes, ideas and business plans with them.
Therefore
, it is apparent from the above situation that people who prefer
offline
 friends love to spend their time in their
friends
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friends'
 company.
moreover body
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Moreover, body
Moreover body
 language is
aother
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 most
sighificant
important in effect or meaning
significant
 matter in communication
,
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,
whereas
this
 has been masked in communication through technology In conclusion,
Although
 with online
freindships
the state of being friends (or friendly)
friendships
 one can make lots of
friends but
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friends, but
 if you compare it with
offline
 friendships I personally believe that meeting in person is more beneficial than talking to
somone
a human being
someone
 in a virtual environment.

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