In many places, new homes are needed, but only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What your opinion about this with example?

Nowadays,
this
is an age of globalization. The number of
building increasing
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building, increasing
buildings increasing
buildings buildings increasing
day by day all over the world. There are several
reason
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reasons
for
this
. The improvement of
construction
has
made the
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made, the
smaller world. Some people believe that we should utilize the
space
for
apartment
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an apartment
and/or commercial building constructions to
beneficial
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benefit
human beings, while others think that we should protect the rural areas
for
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of
farm and upcoming generations know about old culture. Both the options have their pros and cons.
Hence
, Man has made remarkable progress in
construction
work and In today’s era, Arise building is a competition across the countries. In world committee’s says that if they do not see the massive buildings, It may consider poverty nations. Arise buildings gives us job opportunities and open the door for living standard luxury life. The pace of life has increased.
For example
, In India, The government
provide
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provides
incentives and subsidies to poverty people so that They can live the good life in the near future and boost the
construction
industries
also
. Day by day unemployment is increasing in today’s era and we now think about youngster’s employment, which gives a lot of Job opportunities. On the other side, sometimes
arise
move upward
rise
buildings leads to a host of problems. It
is occupied
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has occupied
occupies
the land
space
and construct the building which is
bad image
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a bad image
for rural area because they could not use for agriculture and farm on it. They believe that one-day loss their culture
also
and transform from rural to urban area with massive buildings and make congested for each and every
people
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person
.
Besides
, increasing pollution
also spoil
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also spoils
the greenery area and natural beauty inclusive environment which will affected
to
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by
global warming.
For example
, In Singapore they do not have
space
for agriculture and do farming on the balcony and terrace. In conclusion, arise buildings as
construction
gives us
lot
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lots
a lot
of opportunities and make a high standard of
living but
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living, but
the
space
is
also
important to preserve for the natural beauty and farming for basic amenities. In short, the benefits are numerous while the
drawbacks
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drawbacks, also
also
should not be overlooked.

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