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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at one problem that may result.

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When computers
first
 made their way into
business sector
Suggestion
the business sector
, everyone believed that they would make people' jobs easier. What was not expected was that computers would eliminate jobs.
Besides
 contributing to unemployment, theses automated workers often exhibit inadequate job performance. A number of jobs have been lost as a direct result of new computer technology. Ticket agents in various transportation facilities, from subway or under-ground stations to airports are virtually nonexistent these days. Bank teller have been greatly reduced due to automated bank machines.
In addition
, many call
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 that may help lines are almost entirely computerized. A few years ago I worked as a helper in our local library. Today
this
 position does not exist, because six new computers have been installed. The number of positions lost to computers grows exponentially and unemployment continues to get worse. While a computer may easily achieve the main tasks of these jobs, most computers fall short when customers
have unique request
Suggestion
have a unique request
 or problem. A pre-paid ticket booth does not have insight about the entertainment district and cannot offer friendly directions to s tourist.
Similarly
, an automated bank
machines
Suggestion
machine
 cannot provide assistance and reassurance to a customer who has just had his credit card stolen. And, more often than not, automated telephone operators cannot answer the one question that we have, and we end up waiting on the line to with someone anyway. Every time I go into the library where I worked I notice elderly people who don't know how to use computers and can’t find anyone to help. In the future, I believe a new
business
 trend will evolve. As computers eliminate jobs, new position will have to be invented. More and more people will go into
business
 for themselves, and hopefully put the personal touch back into
business
Suggestion
the business
. I believe that the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computers.
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