Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.

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Now a days
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Nowadays
, students
stays
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stay
are staying
without their families due to lack of universities in their place.Unavailability of universities is could be the one of reason and the other
hand some
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hand, some
of the students
wants
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want
to stay alone.In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss about
advantages
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the advantages
and disadvantages of staying students without family. While students staying without family, they can learn how to live in society and how to manage the things in the society.They can find themselves if they are staying with
right persons
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the right persons
.There is a chance to learn new things when they are staying with others.
For example
, if
mutiple
having or involving or consisting of more than one part or entity or individual
multiple
region students
stays
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stay
in
same room
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the same room
there they can learn multiple languages so that they can be
multi lingual
using or knowing more than one language
multilingual
.And they can learn multiple traditions from different persons.If they can able to manage multiple
persons
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persons, then
then
they can manage multiple persons in their work as well. Other side there
is
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are
possible distractions in staying without family. If students
moves
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move
out from home
then
they can feel they have Independence.If students
takes
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take
are taking
have taken
this
advantage in the wrong
way
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way, then
then
their future will be in the wrong direction.
For example
, some of the students are rankers in education while they are staying with their family once they move out
from
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of
family
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the family
they will become poor students in education. In conclusion, every coin has two sides.If you find
right
side
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side, then
then
you will find
right
direction if not you will go in
wrong path
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a wrong path
the wrong path
.
Like wise
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Likewise
staying without family have both
crons
the part of a tooth above the gum that is covered with enamel
crowns
cons
cranes
and pros
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would suggest staying without family is not a problem if students find the
right
persons and
right
direction.

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