In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

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In recent years, some countries in Europe, schools are conducting practical training classes alongside of academic education for improvement of students life in

future

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the future

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, some schools are still in the same method of providing more

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subjects. In

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essay, we will look at the aspects with suitable example about the schools should teach both life level training and

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subjects.

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with, technologies are quite changing from time-to-time. To cope with the things, children should be trained to get adapt the dynamic

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from their

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they will get struggle to face the challenges when they will become adults.

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, in Italy, an engineering graduates are multiplied in number of times from years to years. All of them get a job is questionable. The reason that they are lack of accepting and fighting the dynamic

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, schools from some countries in Europe are following the traditional educational method to teach the children

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subjects and overlook the practical level training.

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, if they want to learn any new

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skill set

in their advanced schooling, they will get difficult to adopt it.

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, some countries in Europe like UK,

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the current fact in their living

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, implement some more trainings like team co-ordination, group activities along with their

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syllabus.

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, a recent survey conducted by The Times in UK that the employment crisis rate is much less in

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the UK

when compared the other countries in Europe. The fact is they will get practical trainings from their

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level. To conclude, schools should be keen to adapt the technology update and living condition up-to-date, introduce as much possible in their

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syllabus.

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, children will ready to tackle the challenging

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whey they faced.

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In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

Your opinion

Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays internet addiction become trend discuss about causes and effects for this problem

It is beneficial for both employers and employees if employees are given longer holidays away from work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?