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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut-down the rate of committing crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Technological advancements have had
influence
Suggestion
an influence
 on every aspect of life. Some people believe that the state-of-the-art technology has reduced the occurrence of
crime
. I completely agree with
this
 view. Emphatically, over the past two decades enough work is done in the field of science and technology to safeguard the citizens.
To begin
 with, safety of women always remains top priority for law enforcement agencies and is addressed to a large extent by designing location sharing applications. Women can share SOS messages to police as well as near-ones in case of danger and can be rescued.
Secondly
, we have enormous cutting-edge technologies that act as a deterrent for people to commit
crime
 as they are afraid of getting caught during police investigations.
For instance
, lie-detectors,
narco
Suggestion
Narco
 analysis, phone recording, forensic science, surveillance camera and many more have solved many baffling cases immediately sending rogue offenders behind the bars.
Such
 speedy
redressal
Suggestion
Redressal
 of
crime
 prevents devious people with
mala
an animal that produces gametes (spermatozoa) that can fertilize female gametes (ova)
male
fide
a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
field
guide
 intensions from committing
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offences
.
Furthermore
, information technology department has extended their vigilance over online hackers, and extremists active on social media. The cyber
crime
 department across the globe share information within no time to prevent online hacking, and to trace the location of hackers. They
also
 prevent anti-social elements from spreading
malice
Suggestion
malicious
 / ill will.
Last
 but not least, surveillance camera, burglar alarms, and many more dented the confidence of burglars to execute theft. Even stolen mobile phones could be tracked if it has
tracking
Suggestion
tracked
 application installed in it. In a nutshell, latest advancements in gizmos and science play a major role as
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
 is constantly on
decline
Suggestion
the decline
. The future will be more peaceful and safe for all.
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