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Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. What opinion do you agree and why?

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Women play very important roles in the world. They are major players in the family and
community
Suggestion
the community
 at large. Different communities have different social-cultural belief system for women. Some communities are of the opinion that women should be at
home
 and take care of the family and children whilst other would prefer women to be active participants in economic development;
hence
, they encourage women to take roles within
organization
Suggestion
an organization
the organization
organizations
 and develop careers. Men and women make up families and each of its members
depend
Suggestion
depends
 on one another.
This
 includes; clothing, shelter, food and other basic amenities. Men are known as major players in delivering basic amenities
to
Suggestion
for
 their families.
Although
, these might not be enough as the number of dependents might outweigh the capacity of the men. Women can assist to shed some responsibilities
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 the men.
Hence
, the need for women to be more involved in building a
career
 rather that depending solely on the income of men.
This
 would improve the standard of livelihood and empower the women.
Although
, there is
also
 a need for proper grooming of the children and
upkeeping
 of the
home
; the responsibilities
can be shed
Suggestion
can shed
 between both the women and the men. It is
also
 important to note that raising a good
home
 need men and women. Women are
also
 known to have a good multi-tasking skill. They can combine both
career
 and family.
Hence
, constraining them alone to the
home
 would mean limiting their capacity. They can
also
 use
this
 skill to excel in their
career
. Todays’
career
 trend; we can conclude that there are many active women excelling in careers and
also
 taking adequate care of their children.
Hence
 most western world, Organizations have been able to create a balance for women

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