Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. What opinion do you agree and why?

Women play very important roles in the world. They are major players in the family and

community

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the community

at large. Different communities have different social-cultural belief system for women. Some communities are of the opinion that women should be at

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and take care of the family and children whilst other would prefer women to be active participants in economic development;

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, they encourage women to take roles within

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an organization

the organization

organizations

and develop careers. Men and women make up families and each of its members

depend

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depends

on one another.

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includes; clothing, shelter, food and other basic amenities. Men are known as major players in delivering basic amenities

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for

their families.

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, these might not be enough as the number of dependents might outweigh the capacity of the men. Women can assist to shed some responsibilities

off

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of

the men.

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, the need for women to be more involved in building a

career

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rather that depending solely on the income of men.

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would improve the standard of livelihood and empower the women.

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, there is

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a need for proper grooming of the children and

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of the

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; the responsibilities

can be shed

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can shed

between both the women and the men. It is

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important to note that raising a good

home

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need men and women. Women are

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known to have a good multi-tasking skill. They can combine both

career

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and family.

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, constraining them alone to the

home

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would mean limiting their capacity. They can

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use

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skill to excel in their

career

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. Todays’

career

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trend; we can conclude that there are many active women excelling in careers and

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taking adequate care of their children.

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most western world, Organizations have been able to create a balance for women