Car ownership has increased rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
From
Suggestion
For
past three decades
Suggestion
the past three decades
, many cities suffering problems due to increase in the
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
Use synonyms
on roads.
This
Linking Words
has been increasing rapidly and affecting not only
traffic
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
jam but
Accept comma addition
jam, but
also
Linking Words
polluting environment.The truth about
this
Linking Words
statement and
government
Use synonyms
measures to control
this
Linking Words
issue, both points are described in an upcoming
paragraphs
Suggestion
paragraph
. People are owning cars to make their life more
comfortable but
Accept comma addition
comfortable, but
it
it is
it's
making
huge impact
Suggestion
a huge impact
on
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
Use synonyms
. In the same vein, more vehicles on roads can
lead congestion
Suggestion
lead to congestion
and drivers cannot easily come out if they get caught
in
Suggestion
on
congestion road.
Moreover
Linking Words
, in big cities,
this
Linking Words
issue is highly impacting and due to
more
Suggestion
the more jam number
a more jam number
jam
Use synonyms
number of accidents are
also
Linking Words
increased from
last
Linking Words
10 years.
For instance
Linking Words
, in Delhi,
Use synonyms
traffic
Suggestion
the traffic jam rate
jam
Use synonyms
rate is too high and people are facing
alot
Suggestion
a lot
troubles like getting late for the office or any event.
However
Linking Words
, to control
this
Linking Words
drastic problem
government
Use synonyms
should take effective measures.
First
Linking Words
of all,
government
Use synonyms
should encourage car pooling so it can reduce some
jam
Use synonyms
and protect
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
Secondly
Linking Words
,
government
Use synonyms
can aware people by
compaigning
the campaign of a candidate to be elected
campaigning
combining
complaining
or some programs to make people understand how
this
Linking Words
congestion on
road
Suggestion
the road
roads
due to cars affecting their day to day life.
For instance
Linking Words
, Odd and Even program run by Delhi's Chief Minister to discourage people from using their cars. So these kind of programs should be encouraged more that people can move to public transport than owning a vehicle. In conclusion,
Use synonyms
traffic
Suggestion
the traffic jam
a traffic jam
jam
Use synonyms
is becoming a
biggest
Suggestion
bigger
chaos on roads.It is affecting people's time and
also
Linking Words
increasing accidents. But
government
Use synonyms
should take some strict actions to overcome
this
Linking Words
issue. I totally agree with
this
Linking Words
statement that
Use synonyms
traffic
Suggestion
the traffic jam
jam
Use synonyms
is a huge problem nowadays.
Submitted by smily446 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: