The diagrams below gives information about the msnufscture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the informationand reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the production process of salted fish cakes which could be warmed in an oven, in
fact
the organic mixture is in a microwaveable container.
Add the comma(s)
,fact
At
the beginning, it is delivered the primary products, Change the preposition
In
such
as fresh salmons and potatoes, even if they arrive in the industry with
Change preposition
at
a
different Correct article usage
apply
time
: the first ones are brought every 12 hours or less, Fix the agreement mistake
times
while
the second
ones every one
month.
The fish is prepared in a different pale compared to vegetables. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Firstly
, the machine adds to
salmon, lemon juice and salt; after two employees remove skin and bones and another one checks their work. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, the haddock is mixed with peas and sauce, worked
before.
Correct pronoun usage
which worked
In meanwhile
, the potatoes are cleared and peeled, Change preposition
Meanwhile
furthermore
sliced and boiled. Chilli is added to them, for having a good taste. After
this
preparation, the
Correct your spelling
they
are
rested on Change the verb form
is
the
top of the organic mixture.
The pie is wrapped and Correct article usage
apply
also
frozen, thus
it is ready to be sold in each market in the UK.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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