the graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer

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days in England. The pie chart delineates information about what electrical appliances spend most

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. Seen together the figures suggest a link between the

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and how

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is used. The

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typical days in winter peaked at over 40000 units of

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in around 21

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another high point in roughly

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before falling sharply. The average English home uses

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in winter, which is Heating rooms and heating water. It accounts for half of all statistical results. The

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typical days in summer peaked at roughly 20000 units of

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in around 14

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high point is about 24

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. The amount of

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account for 17.5% is ovens, kettles, and washing machines, the other percentages of

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in an average English home at 15% is shared by both categories, namely lighting, TV, radio, Vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools.