Today,the high sales of popular consumer goods reflects the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold to what extent do u agree or disagree

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An increase

in the sales of end user goods shows the capacity of

advertisingnot

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advertising not

necessarily the needs of the nation where they are sold.

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some will argue that consumers go for the goods they need not minding the

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a public promotion of some product or service

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essay will agree with the fact that advertisements affect the sales of goods regardless the needs of the buyer

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, notice on public media for promotion of products increases the awareness of

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products Making buyers informed.

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in turns increases the sales as end buyers will usually go for products that they have seen others use. In making

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purchases

of my cell phone

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I looked out for the most popular

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ones, especially

on television

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make a sound typical of metallic objects

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noting their quality, durability and producers.

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influenced my choice without minding if the

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, models and popular celebrities are used for the sole purpose of advertising,

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makes

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products trying to imitate the models who are significant persons in the society.

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However these

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However, these

products may not necessarily be needful or portray the qualities being advertised. Looking at fashion as a glaring example, celebrities may dress in a way that does not conform to the

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widely known and esteemed

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some purchase it because of the value added by advertisement.

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advertisement has a great influence on

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consumer's

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some may argue that consumers purchase has nothing to do with

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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298 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumer behavior
perceived need
lifestyle aspirations
brand image
prestige
psychological techniques
scarcity
social proof
celebrity endorsements
technological advancements
product innovations
emerging consumer needs

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