You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter • advise them of your situation • explain how this is affecting you • request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regards to the loss of my student identification card, without which I am facing issues. I bring my identification card daily and is usually tied to the belt of my paint. But a few days back I noticed it wasn’t there. Even after looking at all the possible places and even complaining

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lost and found, I have come to a conclusion, that it might have got lost while I was driving my bike. Without an

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I am not able to issue any book from

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. Even more, to return the books I do require a student

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, failure to produce which the books are not returned.

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has caused me a fine of Rs. 100 till date. The absence of

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especially causes issues when there is an event in the college, taking part in which requires my

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. I am in

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urgent need of a new identification card.

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I know that it takes approximately 30 days, I would be grateful if you could issue it earlier. Faithfully yours, Anmol.

sevis24575Fri Nov 22 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

180 words

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