The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
Line
graph
visualises the
number
of people travelling in an underground station in London which
also
showcase
Correct subject-verb agreement
showcases
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additional information
comprises
Wrong verb form
comprised
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with it. Usually, the Line
graph
has two relative aspects of the data.
Likewise
, here
also
they took
Correct article usage
the passengers
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passengers
Fix the agreement mistake
passenger
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count and the
Time
from 6:00 to 22:00 which shows the
number
of people travel in the particular
time
. These passengers numbers were taken in an underground station in London. At 8:00, There were around 400 people using
this
underground station But at 6:00 and 16:00 there were few in
number
nearly 100. Along
this
graph
, It was more fluctuated and don't have any steady
number
unlike in a few hours between 11:30 and 14:00. The given line
graph
which starts increasing in the early morning, decrease after 8:00 and
also
again start to increase after 10:00 but not as same in the beginning of the day. After the few hours of the increase it starts maintain a steady plateau for the two hours.
Although
, There were a more fluctuation found in post mid
time
on comparing with the pre mid
time
. Even Though it got to fall after 18:00, After it reaches the 20:00 it starts to rise up. Despite of the
number
it comprises that there were
also
some passengers are there who travel in the late night. At the
last
hour
also
the
number
is not at all less than the starting
number
. To summarise
this
graph
, Even they have more variation in their count, It always maintains a considerable count in spite of their
time
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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