Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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There are originally seven basic

colours

in the world which we can notice in a rainbow. It will have red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo and violet. All other

colours

were developed by combining a particular amount of one with

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another

colour

For instance

, brown, pink, white, black and so on these are

the

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examples of mixing

colours

. I will discuss

about

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how

colour

plays a key role

humans'

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in humans'

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mental health in

day to day

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life. The

colour

will

also

impact human thinking.

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, everyone will have their own favourite

colour

and they want to paint their houses with their choice of

colour

and purchase things,

dresses

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everything whatever they feel to own

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for themselves. when it comes to public places there are some

colours

which

gives

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them

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peace of mind

while

seeing it for

long

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time. In some

researches

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, scientistsfound that white

colour

gives you

peaceful

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mind and relaxation

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longer time visual of

colour

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in large number of hospital management prefer to paint in white

colour

because the patients will get relaxation seeing it without going

in depression

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about

thier

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their

health,

while

for parks many suggest

to paint

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the compound

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green

colour

. In my opinion, A decent

colour

and pleasant

colour

can improve

the

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people's mental ability in their work. Nowadays, every product comes in different

colours

to attract

the

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people in every way for growth in their business. It is a business strategy even though people

doesn't

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want to buy the product they will get tempted

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the

colour

and

brought

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buy

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it.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Word repetition
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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

People today are more concerned with owing material possession than with developing friendships and family relationship. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

SOME PEOPLE THINK THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD PAY FOR HEALTH CARE AND EDUCATION, BUT OTHERS BELIEVE IT IS NOT THE GOVERNMENT’S RESPONSIBILITY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.