The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
This
illustrates how electricity is made using geothermal energy. There are a total of five steps in producing electricity. First, cold water
is placed in a container then
it is pumped down in a 4.5km shaft below the ground. The water
passes through an injection well which then
travels a
tube where the geothermal zone, which is composed of hot rocks, can be found. Change preposition
to a
At the end
of the geothermal zone, the heated water
enters the production well. The water
is then
pumped up through a condenser which is found at the end
of the power plant. The condenser collects the steam produced from the hot water
. The steam passes through and enables the turbines to move producing energy that is
converted to electricity via generator
. The generator acts not justAdd an article
a generator
a
reservoir but Change preposition
as a
also
as a distributor across the city through the power lines.Submitted by rbsreal on
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