The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
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This
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illustrates how electricity is made using geothermal energy. There are a total of five steps in producing electricity. First, cold
water
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is placed in a container
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it is pumped down in a 4.5km shaft below the ground. The
water
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passes through an injection well which
then
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travels
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tube where the geothermal zone, which is composed of hot rocks, can be found.
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of the geothermal zone, the heated
water
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enters the production well. The
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is
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pumped up through a condenser which is found
at the end
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of the power plant. The condenser collects the steam produced from the hot
water
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. The steam passes through and enables the turbines to move producing energy
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converted to electricity via
generator
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. The generator acts not just
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reservoir but
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as a distributor across the city through the power lines.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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