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Each year, the crime rate increases. What do you think are the causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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In the
last
 few years, we have seen a drastic escalation in crimes, year on year
this
 rate has been incremental. The factors causing the rise are gender disorientation and money, to curtail the crime people should focus on working hard and should be taught to behave in
company
Suggestion
the company
 of a female.
This
 essay will elaborate the reasons of
such
 an increase and would suggest some solutions. Nowadays, people have very varied motives to commit illegal activities having said that rape and abuse is one of the top criminal activity of 21st century,
for example
, in India itself 2
lakh
 cases were registered under rape category. Many men do not understand the word consent have their female partners or strangers as a bait for their pleasures, these people often mentally sick and have a weird lifestyle. The
second
 factor is the money, poverty and unemployment has contributed a-lot
in
Suggestion
of
 criminal activities. Maximum number of people steal food, clothes, jewellery and money to sustain in
this
 world, rather than focusing on getting a job or employment, they would prefer to rob others. The solutions to eradicate the crimes globally, we have to resolve the root cause of it. Gender equality and orientation should be very well taught in the schools along with appropriate behaviours, children getting understanding of these subjects would behave in a normal manner in front of other genders.
In addition
, government should work on having more employment opportunities for populations they are governing. If there would ample opportunity of paid work, people would be hesitant to do any criminal act. In conclusion, criminal activity has been
magnifying
Suggestion
magnified
 lately. While factor affecting
this
 rise are
increase
Suggestion
increasing
 in assaults and robberies because of inflation. To curb
this
 situation government should allow schools to teach behaviours to young children and increase the employment work across their area.
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