We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways however can new technology help maintain our traditions?

It is true that often new invention in the world of
technology
create some problems towards individual cultures and values.
However
, there are multifold
way when
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way, when
technology
help
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helps
people to save and maintain their traditions.
Firstly
,
technology
is discover
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is discovering
has discovered
is discovered
discovers
to enjoy and facilitate individual life with some ease, and people can learn many crucial lessons from
such
technologies.
In other words
, people stay connected with each other with the help of mobile phone, it is one of the cultures in human to maintain connection between family and friends.
For example
, as per studies found that availability of mobile phone in rural area
help
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helps
people to stay in touch with their
love
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loved
ones who are away from them due to the work,
as a result
they have
build
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built
strong bonding among them.
Secondly
,
internet
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the internet
is biggest invention which
has raise
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has raised
the bar higher and help individual to acquire appropriate knowledge about their values and cultures, which was learnt by them from their grandparents. In India, to illustrate
this
, Google
have asked
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has asked
more
then
fifty thousands of people about their traditions and it was shocking for observer that
majority
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the majority
of people have referred to the YouTube to know about their traditions which they were not aware at all.
Finally
, new discovery always plays a vital role in human life so that they can learn about their past generations
such
as recorded videos help today’s generation to implement the same procedure to do activities
such
as weddings and follow the old rituals. In conclusion, There are many threats which has raised by the
technology
against
people
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peoples'
peoples
traditions.
However
, there is no doubt that
technology
has helped individual to stay connected with their cultures and values.

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