The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
number
of male and female Students who graduate from Canadian Universities between 1992 and 2007. (19)
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
graduates
Use synonyms
in
both genders shows an increasing trend. Change preposition
of
However
, the Linking Words
number
Use synonyms
female
Change preposition
of female
graduates
were considerably higher than male Use synonyms
graduates
throughout Use synonyms
this
period. In comparison, starting from 99,000 in 1992, the Linking Words
number
of female Use synonyms
graduates
increased gradually to approximately 104,000 in 1995. After that, Use synonyms
this
figure declined smoothly to 100,000 in 1998 and Linking Words
then
again went up to around 129,000 in 2004. For the rest three years, the Linking Words
number
of female students rose significantly to just fewer than 150,000. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
number
of male Use synonyms
graduates
rose steadily from 70,000 in 1992 to almost 88,000 in 1995. Use synonyms
Then
Linking Words
this
value decreased approximately to 1992 figure in1998. Despite some fluctuations between 1998 and 2001, the Linking Words
number
of male Use synonyms
graduates
climbed Use synonyms
up
to around 97,000 in 2004 and Change preposition
apply
then
ended at 95,000 in 2007. (134)
Linking Words
Thus
, the Linking Words
number
of female Use synonyms
graduates
always dominated over male Use synonyms
graduates
in universities Use synonyms
at
Canada throughout Change preposition
in
this
period. (18)Linking Words
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