The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words

The chart gives the statistics of the young people of both genders in Slovakia who used

internet

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for eight popular online activities in July. (24)

Overall

, the proportion of both male and female

internet

users

was the highest for emails and messaging and the lowest for job hunting. In comparison, the percentage of

males

was the same for emails and messaging at 82%

while

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figure was the highest for female email

users

at 88%.

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number of females performed online

internet

banking and social networking,

whereas

this

ratio was comparatively high for

males

for

internet

banking at 73%. In health research, the number of female

users

was almost double, just over 60%, as compared to

males

which were around 33%. For online education and streaming video/games, the number of females exceeded, by 1% and 5%, respectively than

males

.

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proportion (21%) of

males

and females searched

internet

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for job hunting. (129) In short, the percentage of female

users

was

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dramatically rose

up

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for Health Services but remained equal for job hunting. (19)