The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
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The graph illustrates per head
consumption
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of three fast food items in grams in
UK
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the UK
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between 1970 and 1990. (19)
Overall
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, the
consumption
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of
hamburger
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hamburgers
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and
fish
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or
chips
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shows an increasing trend
while
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the
consumption
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of
pizza
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shows a decreasing trend during
this
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interval of twenty
years
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. Between 1970 and 1980, the
consumption
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of
hamburger
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hamburgers
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and
fish
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or
chips
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went up smoothly from 20
gram
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grams
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(20g) to 100g and from 95g to 150g respectively.
While
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the utilization of
pizza
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went down gradually from 300g to just over 200g by 1980. In the
next
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ten
years
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, the
consumption
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of
fish
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and
chips
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rose dramatically high to 600g. The
consumption
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of
hamburger
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hamburgers
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first increased steadily from 1981 to 1985 and
then
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rose sharply in the
second
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half of
this
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interval.
However
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, the
consumption
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of
pizza
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declined smoothly in the first five
years
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and
then
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becomes stable at about 100g in the
last
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five
years
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. (133)
Thus
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,
fish
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and
chips
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remained the most consumed junk foods in Britain by 1990
while
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the popularity of
pizza
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decreased steadily in the first fifteen
years
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. (26)

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, pizza, years, g with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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