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As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to overpopulation, local governments are finding it difficult to provide basic living and
range
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a range
 of transport facilities to inhabitants due to less available space in
city
 for expansion. While few believe relocating commercial businesses to
outskirts
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the outskirts
 of the
city
 would help in building new infrastructure in the
city
 for citizens. There are
lot
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lots
 of benefits in moving industries
to
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in
 rural areas which can contribute in
city
’s growth directly.
Firstly
, it would make room for
local governing body
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a local governing body
local governing bodies
 to develop more housing and transportation space in
city
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the city
cities
a city
.
Secondly
, pollution can be curbed to an extent caused due to commercial activities carried out by
industries
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the industries
.
Thirdly
, entrepreneurs would get an opportunity to expand their business in
countryside
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the countryside
 due to free availability of land.
Lastly
, people staying in rural areas would have more employment opportunities within their reach.
For instance
, in
city
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the city
a city
cities
 of “Tuscan” in Italy, it is mandatory for commercial businesses to be
setup
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set up
 in 50 miles away from
city
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the city
.
Therefore
, it is quite beneficial for businesses to move out from
city
 for overall development and growth of
city
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cities
the city
 and businesses both.
On the contrary
, there are few demerits which
needs
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need
 to be considered if firms are
moved
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moving
 and relocated. Due to
heavy emission
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the heavy emission
 of toxic industrial waste, pollution can rise at a tremendous rate. Natural beauty and wildlife will be endangered due to their production activities. People employed
with
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by
 these firms living in
city
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the city
a city
cities
 would have to travel more in order to reach their work.
For example
, trees were axed in Rosevile area of Boston to enable new businesses to set up, which resulted in decline of wildlife in the vicinity.
Hence
, moving companies in outskirts of
city
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the city
has
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have
 its own share of disadvantages to ponder upon. In my opinion, there
are
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is
lot
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a lot
 of merits it has to offer for overall development of
city
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the city
cities
 as well as the industries. By implementing strict norms for
moved
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has moved
moving
 industries, even disadvantages can be controlled to a great extent. Cities can seamlessly offer more accommodation and transport facilities and industries can flourish by expanding their business and production. To conclude, local government needs to put certain regulations in place that will help businesses
to relocate
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relocate
 and prosper without affecting the natural beauty preserved in rural areas. Efficient civic planning by native economy would help find a win-win solution for everyone.

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