Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive pension at an earlier age. • Do you agree or disagree? • Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

People vary in opinion regarding retirement
age
to be fixed for all occupations and believe
that is
unfair for some people with certain occupations. I partially agree with
this
statement for
few different reasons
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a few different reasons
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to discuss them in the article. I believe it is somehow unfair for employees with
certain occupation
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a certain occupation
certain occupations
to wait until 65 for retirement. On the
first
hand, some jobs are more demanding physically and mentally by
nature especially
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nature, especially
if started at
young
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a young age
age
. These jobs,
for example
construction workers, minors or those who work offshore on an oil rig, struggle through their jobs physically as they are required for some heavy lifting, and it will become inadequate for them to perform their
job
as they grow older. A study conducted by WHO that connects health issues are more prone to happen for those who work in
such
demanding jobs after the
age
of 45 over those who have
desk
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desk jobs
a desk job
job
or less physically demanding jobs. It is only unfair for anyone who has a demanding
job
to wait until 65 to retire. On the
second
hand, retiring at the
age
of 45 can cause turbulence within the economy, as soon as someone retires, they stop paying taxes and start receiving extra benefits from the government. It will cause a burden over the country where they need to keep certain standards and benefits for them, now imagine if
this
number increases or doubles in its worst-case scenario. Not a lot of hard working individual
tend
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tends
to
favor
promote over another
favour
this
, as they will be paying additional taxes to support the retired individual.
Moreover
, retiring at
younger
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a younger age
younger ages
age
will create a
job
market gap, as many of the jobs will start lacking experienced employees that could potentially be the success of many businesses. In conclusion, Retirement is heated topic where many people believe they are paying through their taxes to support those who retire at
young
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a young age
the young age
age
and others believe that their
job
is physically demanding and cause them a physical harm if they continue until the
age
of 65.
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