Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive pension at an earlier age. • Do you agree or disagree? • Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

People vary in opinion regarding retirement

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to be fixed for all occupations and believe

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unfair for some people with certain occupations. I partially agree with

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statement for

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a few different reasons

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would like to discuss them in the article. I believe it is somehow unfair for employees with

certain occupation

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a certain occupation

certain occupations

to wait until 65 for retirement. On the

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hand, some jobs are more demanding physically and mentally by

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nature, especially

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a young age

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. These jobs,

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construction workers, minors or those who work offshore on an oil rig, struggle through their jobs physically as they are required for some heavy lifting, and it will become inadequate for them to perform their

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as they grow older. A study conducted by WHO that connects health issues are more prone to happen for those who work in

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demanding jobs after the

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of 45 over those who have

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desk jobs

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or less physically demanding jobs. It is only unfair for anyone who has a demanding

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to wait until 65 to retire. On the

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hand, retiring at the

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of 45 can cause turbulence within the economy, as soon as someone retires, they stop paying taxes and start receiving extra benefits from the government. It will cause a burden over the country where they need to keep certain standards and benefits for them, now imagine if

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number increases or doubles in its worst-case scenario. Not a lot of hard working individual

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tends

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, as they will be paying additional taxes to support the retired individual.

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, retiring at

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a younger age

younger ages

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will create a

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market gap, as many of the jobs will start lacking experienced employees that could potentially be the success of many businesses. In conclusion, Retirement is heated topic where many people believe they are paying through their taxes to support those who retire at

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a young age

the young age

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and others believe that their

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is physically demanding and cause them a physical harm if they continue until the

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of 65.