The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chart
identifies the percentage of
volunteers
who worked in
sport
organization
whereas
the pie
chart
demonstrates distinctive volunteer jobs were done in New Zealand in 2010. Information is divided into four types of families in the bar
chart
and by dissimilar types of volunteer jobs in the pie
chart
.
Overall
, the majority of
volunteers
were
Add an article
a couple
the couple
show examples
couple
Fix the agreement mistake
couples
show examples
with children and the popularity of the group who worked as a coach, instructor or teacher were highest from other
roles
over the period given. The figures suggest an impossible association between the number of
roles
which were dedicated to people and the percentage of
volunteers
in all groups. Lone
person
Fix the agreement mistake
persons
show examples
least preferred to work in
sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
show examples
organizations with 10.9%
while
other households were 1.5 more than the previous group.
In addition
, around half of
volunteers
Add an article
the volunteers
show examples
were
Add an article
a group
show examples
group
Fix the agreement mistake
groups
show examples
of families
who
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
couple
Wrong verb form
coupled
show examples
with no dependent children. The most popular
roles
Fix the agreement mistake
role
show examples
in
sport
Correct article usage
the sport
show examples
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
was
Change the verb form
were
show examples
teaching with 206000 people whilst
referee
Correct article usage
the referee
show examples
or umpire showed little interest in support
roles
. Committee
member
Fix the agreement mistake
members
show examples
or
administrator
Fix the agreement mistake
administrators
show examples
dedicated about
one fourth
Add a hyphen
one-fourth
show examples
of a whole but
scorer
Fix the agreement mistake
scorers
show examples
or
timekeeper
Fix the agreement mistake
timekeepers
show examples
just over doubled in comparison to the medical
sport
or other which was around 62700.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, volunteers, sport, roles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!